Night Moves

[Northern Chill]

At long last, part 8 debuts! That was by far the juiciest update ever!

Well worth the wait this summer and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Big Kudos to the both of you and all your talents.

Thanks Champ!! It was a chapter where I wanted to bring a lot of plot points to a head...and spin off a few new ones.

Northern Chill

[Adon]

Very good story so far, and it seems to be an emotional mess all around. One thing I am curious over (and probably over-thinking) is the android doubles. Were/are they in any way sentient? They appeared to be, to the point about talking about their concerns when nobody could possibly overhear them. They certainly seemed to be 'sleepers', unaware of their nature and programming until it was activated. If that is the case... if they had actual thoughts and emotions, were they not 'real' in a sense? I know that's a divisive issue for many. Some argue that no matter what emotion they display, androids are machines and can be discarded with the same emotion one would. Others (like me) take the view that if they have thoughts and feelings, they're just as real as someone flesh and blood.

Maybe I'm wrong, and they were just very good simulations. But if they weren't, though, that presents an interesting quandary. Their motives were genuinely heroic, and they seemed to be unaware of their sleeper programming. If that's so, do they not have a right to exist? If their sleeper programming were somehow removed, how are they less real than anybody else?

Again, probably overthinking and I know it would add a level of complication that you may not want to explore. But I do think it would be interesting to see the dilemma -- on the one hand, we have two androids who look, act, think and believe they are the real deals -- but with several differences that are visible if you know what to look for. Then we have the originals, who aren't likely to ever be quite what they once were. In other words, fakes who act more like the real ones used to than the real ones do.

Anyway, food for thought!

[Northern Chill]

Very good story so far, and it seems to be an emotional mess all around. One thing I am curious over (and probably over-thinking) is the android doubles. Were/are they in any way sentient? They appeared to be, to the point about talking about their concerns when nobody could possibly overhear them. They certainly seemed to be 'sleepers', unaware of their nature and programming until it was activated. If that is the case... if they had actual thoughts and emotions, were they not 'real' in a sense? I know that's a divisive issue for many. Some argue that no matter what emotion they display, androids are machines and can be discarded with the same emotion one would. Others (like me) take the view that if they have thoughts and feelings, they're just as real as someone flesh and blood.

Maybe I'm wrong, and they were just very good simulations. But if they weren't, though, that presents an interesting quandary. Their motives were genuinely heroic, and they seemed to be unaware of their sleeper programming. If that's so, do they not have a right to exist? If their sleeper programming were somehow removed, how are they less real than anybody else?

Again, probably overthinking and I know it would add a level of complication that you may not want to explore. But I do think it would be interesting to see the dilemma -- on the one hand, we have two androids who look, act, think and believe they are the real deals -- but with several differences that are visible if you know what to look for. Then we have the originals, who aren't likely to ever be quite what they once were. In other words, fakes who act more like the real ones used to than the real ones do.

Anyway, food for thought!

Glad you've enjoyed the story so far, Adon. As for the robots, they were sentient in that they functioned as any other human except for a few key differences (above average strength, sometimes faulty memories, curiousity about new individuals encountered a big heightened and so on). If Plastique had not exposed their true purpose and enacted the fail safe programming built into them, they might have carried on as JW/GG indefinitely even if the originals were restored...that would have been interesting to contemplate.

With their memories purged, though, the robots are inert shells now, as far as Plastique is concerned. That said, she did secure them just in case...Plastique is not naive. It might not be the last we see of the two though....

As for the originals, well, it'll be akin to awaking from a coma for them...a very strange coma...

Northern Chill

[sohta123]

I like Adon's thinking on the robot girls. Ultimately they are robots that can be shut down but they did seem very sentient. "If you prick us do we not leak?"
And it would be very interesting to see them fight with or square of against their originals.
As for the real JW/GG I wonder if any extra data may have come along with their copied memories.
The fact that Plastique just 'happened upon' them by 'accident' seems a bit too lucky and that their minds were available to restore as well. Seems like a setup by the Mistress to me. Or just random dumb luck.

I just love Plastique's wicked side.

[Northern Chill]

I like Adon's thinking on the robot girls. Ultimately they are robots that can be shut down but they did seem very sentient. "If you prick us do we not leak?"
And it would be very interesting to see them fight with or square of against their originals.
As for the real JW/GG I wonder if any extra data may have come along with their copied memories.
The fact that Plastique just 'happened upon' them by 'accident' seems a bit too lucky and that their minds were available to restore as well. Seems like a setup by the Mistress to me. Or just random dumb luck.

I just love Plastique's wicked side.

Given the fact that JW/GG have extra "curves" after things ended, it's safe to say that Plastique's work wasn't perfect. The next chapters will shed light on how JW and GG have been affected mentally...

In every story, there is always an element of luck to some extent...whether that luck is by chance or planned out depends on the plot. For this story, there has been a great deal of planning over relying on luck...and some plans have yet to reach fruition.

Plastique unleashes her Prime persona in the bedroom a fair bit now...certainly makes for interesting scenes..

[xarielx]

A fantastic issue Northern! A very well executed twist, it felt true to the story, and having a number of references to what transpired in previous issues only strengthens the revelation. While I agree that the android Justice Woman and Gallant Girl exist in their own right, and presents an intriguing debate, whether or not something that acts as real as the real thing should be given the same respect and treatment, it's paradoxical to assume that they can exist alongside the authentic versions. The originals, who have in terms of character development, been stunted and left behind in terms of the overall plot, like it's hinted, aren't fully themselves. Would this be a case where the duplicates are more authentic than the original? Plastique in contrast to her comrades continues to develop into an deeply interesting character in her own right, while she brings her friend back from seemingly mindless dolldom, she has no qualms about keeping her own doll, Anna, under lock and key, and uses her almost as one would expect a butler, mentally noting that Anna "takes care of business" so to speak, while Plastique isn't in her home. This kind of duality, again evidenced by her shift into her Prime persona once aroused, is jarring but highly charged, and again in contrast to the lack of emotional change by the absent Justice and Gallant, Plastique exhibits a wide range of character, from caregiver, and protector to an unstable dominatrix. This issue is perhaps my favourite of yours so far, your artwork once again is better than ever, the length and breadth covered in each issue is in a word, unrivalled, where seemingly three or four issues interweave with one another, bringing Miss Tricks and this current issue together for example, and in short, accolades aren't enough to the work you and Uzo have put into this piece. Thank you!

[Northern Chill]

A fantastic issue Northern! A very well executed twist, it felt true to the story, and having a number of references to what transpired in previous issues only strengthens the revelation. While I agree that the android Justice Woman and Gallant Girl exist in their own right, and presents an intriguing debate, whether or not something that acts as real as the real thing should be given the same respect and treatment, it's paradoxical to assume that they can exist alongside the authentic versions. The originals, who have in terms of character development, been stunted and left behind in terms of the overall plot, like it's hinted, aren't fully themselves. Would this be a case where the duplicates are more authentic than the original? Plastique in contrast to her comrades continues to develop into an deeply interesting character in her own right, while she brings her friend back from seemingly mindless dolldom, she has no qualms about keeping her own doll, Anna, under lock and key, and uses her almost as one would expect a butler, mentally noting that Anna "takes care of business" so to speak, while Plastique isn't in her home. This kind of duality, again evidenced by her shift into her Prime persona once aroused, is jarring but highly charged, and again in contrast to the lack of emotional change by the absent Justice and Gallant, Plastique exhibits a wide range of character, from caregiver, and protector to an unstable dominatrix. This issue is perhaps my favourite of yours so far, your artwork once again is better than ever, the length and breadth covered in each issue is in a word, unrivalled, where seemingly three or four issues interweave with one another, bringing Miss Tricks and this current issue together for example, and in short, accolades aren't enough to the work you and Uzo have put into this piece. Thank you!

Thanks, Xarielx. Plastique's persona has come a long ways from when she first appeared in this series...it'll be enlightening to see if JW and GG are able to adapt as well as she has. That, and how others respond to the turmoil of this chapter.

Uzo deserves all the plaudits for the art in the series and more...it's been great to see how the scenes unfold under Uzo's master works.

Look for the next chapter hopefully in late October.

Northern Chill

[Northern Chill]

Hello everybody...today, part nine of Night Moves debuts here in the member's section at MCComix.

After the seismic events of the last chapter, our trio of heroines try to get back to a semblance of normalcy even as they digest what has happened in the recent past. For Justice Woman and Gallant Girl, that means getting back to dealing with the criminal element of Karo City. For Plastique, the heroine desires to help her friends in any way possible. However, what has happened seems to have changed the dynamics of the trio...and their thinking on a profound level particularly when it comes to satisfying their individual sexual needs. Find out what happens in this steamy chapter of Night Moves.

Members can find this update at http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery3 ... ves/Part-9

Big kudos to Uzobono for the phenomenal art in this update and advice on dialog as well.

Enjoy the update...feedback welcome as always!

Northern Chill

[msgrey]

Hello Northernchill!

Thes last issues were the best!

1st.: Wow! Justice and Gallant were robots?! It was a big shock, very sad for Plastique no?, the evil robot attacks must be painful. But she has her friends again, finally, with a new toy with her friend .

To see Dylan very angry was good, the villain loses finally! Justice and Gallants new bodies are delicious, very delicious . 10/10 for this!

2nd: This art is amazing, it is the best issue so far! Justice and Gallant are VERY voluptuous indeed. I think Anna Doll is the biggest . The action, the sex is the best I have seen.

But Justice and Gallant are not the same anymore I think, changed totally. Justice has a sexy secret in her bedroom, and Gallant! Gallant is to say lightly, ADDICTED to sex! Something I think will happen to both because of this, they are too focused on sex!

10/10 for this issue! Best ever! THANK YOU!

[Northern Chill]

Hello Northernchill!

Thes last issues were the best!

1st.: Wow! Justice and Gallant were robots?! It was a big shock, very sad for Plastique no?, the evil robot attacks must be painful. But she has her friends again, finally, with a new toy with her friend .

To see Dylan very angry was good, the villain loses finally! Justice and Gallants new bodies are delicious, very delicious . 10/10 for this!

2nd: This art is amazing, it is the best issue so far! Justice and Gallant are VERY voluptuous indeed. I think Anna Doll is the biggest . The action, the sex is the best I have seen.

But Justice and Gallant are not the same anymore I think, changed totally. Justice has a sexy secret in her bedroom, and Gallant! Gallant is to say lightly, ADDICTED to sex! Something I think will happen to both because of this, they are too focused on sex!

10/10 for this issue! Best ever! THANK YOU!

Thanks, Ms. Grey. As you may have guessed, a lot of things built up to what has happened over the last two chapters..and what is to come in the story finale.

Glad you've enjoyed the story so far!!

Northern Chill

[sohta123]

I'm starting to wonder if Justice Woman and Gallant Girl aren't fast becoming the new model of drones/dolls. One's that still look very much like their former selves instead of identical gray extra-curvy shells.

I'm really hoping that Prime catches onto their addictions and begins taking advantage of them with the rationalization that her real friends no longer really exist anyhow. Maybe she'd reactivate the robots to continue crime-fighting but according to her new desires. Makes for the beginnings of a great villain. Also hoping that Prime winds up with another variation of her costume that is also very kinky and is more a Dom outfit verses her current Sub one.
Additionally it might be cool to have the reason Miss Trix created Prime to begin with is that she wanted to be dominated by the perfect Dom.

Prime, Haven, and Mel are all interesting characters and the three story-arcs going on all seem to lean towards each protagonist yielding to the darkness and maybe all of them becoming villains (hopefully).
And it still all seems like these are beginnings in a much larger story that happens to include these characters.

Keep up the great storytelling.
Can't wait to see more covers and expected dates.

[Sumatra]

Well worth the wait once again. Amazing art and story as always.

Agree on the Plastique angle. She seems to be on her way to being a villain, doubt the old Plastique would have been alright with using dolls or friends like she is.

Justice Woman and Gallant Girl, fucking amazing work here. Easily the best looking physically in my opinion. Especially Gallant Girl, her scenes were HOT. Really, this is why this site is the best, one look through this comic and it blows anything else out of the water.

Both of them have something in them I think left over from being dolls. Interesting to see if Justice Woman will follow suit. Loved the Expose girls cameo, maybe Tanya will add Justice and Gallant, start a collection.

Betting Plastique will enslave both, no way she'd resist her friends being the way they are now.

Fucking awesome work again, sex is through the roof, Gallant Girl's fucking scenes are jawdropping.

-Sumatra

[Northern Chill]

I'm starting to wonder if Justice Woman and Gallant Girl aren't fast becoming the new model of drones/dolls. One's that still look very much like their former selves instead of identical gray extra-curvy shells.

I'm really hoping that Prime catches onto their addictions and begins taking advantage of them with the rationalization that her real friends no longer really exist anyhow. Maybe she'd reactivate the robots to continue crime-fighting but according to her new desires. Makes for the beginnings of a great villain. Also hoping that Prime winds up with another variation of her costume that is also very kinky and is more a Dom outfit verses her current Sub one.
Additionally it might be cool to have the reason Miss Trix created Prime to begin with is that she wanted to be dominated by the perfect Dom.

Prime, Haven, and Mel are all interesting characters and the three story-arcs going on all seem to lean towards each protagonist yielding to the darkness and maybe all of them becoming villains (hopefully).
And it still all seems like these are beginnings in a much larger story that happens to include these characters.

Keep up the great storytelling.
Can't wait to see more covers and expected dates.

Thanks, Sohta. The elements/journeys for PL, GG and JW are building towards a climax and how they each react will dictate their respective lives going forward...

Tricks has a role to play when she returns...if she ever truly left....

[Northern Chill]

Well worth the wait once again. Amazing art and story as always.

Agree on the Plastique angle. She seems to be on her way to being a villain, doubt the old Plastique would have been alright with using dolls or friends like she is.

Justice Woman and Gallant Girl, fucking amazing work here. Easily the best looking physically in my opinion. Especially Gallant Girl, her scenes were HOT. Really, this is why this site is the best, one look through this comic and it blows anything else out of the water.

Both of them have something in them I think left over from being dolls. Interesting to see if Justice Woman will follow suit. Loved the Expose girls cameo, maybe Tanya will add Justice and Gallant, start a collection.

Betting Plastique will enslave both, no way she'd resist her friends being the way they are now.

Fucking awesome work again, sex is through the roof, Gallant Girl's fucking scenes are jawdropping.

-Sumatra

Thanks, Sumatra. One thing that I wanted to show is that though the trio of heroines escaped being thralls of Tricks or pleasure dolls, there were lingering effects for all three...how deep those changes go will spell the future for them.

[xarielx]

I have to admit, this latest issue wasn't my personal favorite at the outset, but seeing and reading the after effects of each woman's experience as a doll helped to overcome the initial disinterest. While Cora's impulsiveness I believe will be her downfall (performing oral on a criminal and ordering what amounts to a gigolo), I quite enjoyed the subtle shift in Justice Woman's demeanour in the bedroom, an aspect of her personality I don't believe was present in the original et al. from issues #1 and #2, and her clone. I think it's a hot, well crafted story you've set Northern, yet given all the evidence so far I hesitate to imagine a happy outcome as you've shown Plastique turning into a neo-villain of sorts, each "turn" quicker than the last if the look on her face in this issue is any indication. While I hold that each heroine will end up with a catharsis in her own way, the direction looks decidedly darker from this point on.