Night Moves

[Northern Chill]

Cover for part 3 of Night Moves is now up in the covers gallery..enjoy and feel free to speculate...

[msgrey]

This cover is very lovely! But it seem bittersweet, it look like all they leave behind is a picture of friends .

[Sumatra]

Confusing. Reunion? Without reading Part 2 it's hard to tell.

My guess is somewhere in Part 2 Plastique is captured? That might be a reunion.

What about her addiction? Is that going to have some effect if she gets turned into a doll?

Loving the covers but Part 2 can't come soon enough.

-Sumatra

[Northern Chill]

All I will say is answers will be provided in part 2...and more questions as well... ...myself and Uzo have cooked up some great ideas going forward in this arc and I think readers will be excited to see what turns lie ahead...

Northern Chill

[fiejon]

Hi Northern, this is one great comic you got going! I've recently finished Silent Auction, bear with me, I'm going to do a bit of guesswork here.

In Night Moves #, the Accumulator mentions "storing the data" as he's getting a blowjob from the Gallant Doll, I take this to mean that she is not permanently gone correct?

Now in Silent Auction we see the bad guy, Jennifer, create a mannequin of her victim, Rhonda.

My guess, and hope I'm not too far off here, is that the Accumulator has created a mannequin of Gallant Girl of his own design and that is where her mind is, similar to your Specialized Shopping issue?

I'm liking this setup a lot where you've taken down the heroes in the first issue and now we play the guessing game of "how" they are going to get out.

[Northern Chill]

Hi Northern, this is one great comic you got going! I've recently finished Silent Auction, bear with me, I'm going to do a bit of guesswork here.

In Night Moves #, the Accumulator mentions "storing the data" as he's getting a blowjob from the Gallant Doll, I take this to mean that she is not permanently gone correct?

Now in Silent Auction we see the bad guy, Jennifer, create a mannequin of her victim, Rhonda.

My guess, and hope I'm not too far off here, is that the Accumulator has created a mannequin of Gallant Girl of his own design and that is where her mind is, similar to your Specialized Shopping issue?

I'm liking this setup a lot where you've taken down the heroes in the first issue and now we play the guessing game of "how" they are going to get out.

Thanks, fiejohn...this serial will have a number of surprises to pop up before the fate of all the heroes is finalized. Hope you enjoy what is to come!

Northern Chill

[Northern Chill]

Hello everybody...today part 2 of Night Moves debuts in the member's section here at MCComix.

Justice Woman and Gallant Girl, two crimefighting heroines new to Karo City, have vanished from public view with no signs as to where they have gone and who might be responsible for their disappearance. Plastique, the third member of the trio, has taken upon herself to find her friends but will her efforts come to naught? What lies in store for them all...and the criminal mastermind that works behind the scenes as only he can? Find out in part 2 of this epic..

This new, and hefty chapter of Night Moves, can be found in the members section at http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2 ... emId=43432

Big kudos to Uzobono for some amazing artwork in this update...Uzo shows a real flair for scenery in this chapter and I'm sure readers here will enjoy it.

Thanks for supporting MComix...feedback welcome as always!

Northern Chill

[kakyo001]

hmm... so the heroines are back...

Juctice Woman's battle with her mind seemed to be genuine... as did Gallant Girls transformation back into her old form (even though she lacked to control to actually move)... it looks like the transformation process isn't as perfect as thought (if the victim has a strong will)

but I doubt they escaped on their own. I do think both of them are now Mark-4 Dolls and their original mind is currently in charge (lacking any memory beyond the initial fight with the drones) and they became unwilling sleeperagents for their master... I hope I'm proven wrong but that's my guess... both heroines are done for... (and Plastique is on her own corruption trip)

[xarielx]

Kakyo001 makes a good point, I have my own doubts, I think these are the real Justice Woman and Gallant Girl but the Accumulator speaks of about some plan at the end, lol this story just got a lot more interesting! Justice Woman's break from his control really solidified her as a hero for me, unabashedly burdened by her new body she keeps going in search of answers. Another high point was their awakening, In my opinion, their memories were erased, and as Kakyo said they are now sleeper agents, making for a lot of intrigue coming up.The police seem genuinely helpful to Plastique, which we have not seen in this setting before, it's a safe buffer to the criminal acts that infest Karo City, and subsequently Plastique's milk addiction is developing very well, I hope we'll see the group together, for better or worse for the first time as hinted as by the next cover? In addition, great artwork, great imagery, the sex was again, better than before. Plastique singing "Peaches" was a happy surprise, classic Anglo-punk fan for that choice?

[Ghosthand]

I don't think that the two that woke up in the wharehouse were really Justice Woman and Galiant Girl. I think they are robotic doubles who have been given their identities. Why turn Galiant Girl into a doll only to turn her back? Plus it is obvious when Dylan is thinking about Roxy that any maid that shows abberations in their behavior ends up on a one way trip to the doll machine. That's my two cents worth though, I could be totally wrong. Great comic so far. looking forward to more

[fiejon]

I guess my guess is still up in the air huh? Way to fail Northern!

Jokin aside, I'll admit I've digested all of your work and Uzobono's in the past few weeks, and it's a pleasure to read your settings.

There'a lot of content here, won't bore you with a long review, and I'll refrain from anymore guesswork!

The sex in the opening pages was some great Poser work I have seen, you really put some love into these pages. That said, some of it went overboard, in a good way mind you, with those dolls squirting milk all over the place!

When Justice Woman woke up I got reminded of those old pulp novels where an amnesiac wakes up in an insane asylum, couple that with that wake up scene, you're just teasing now for the next chapter huh? Them two walking out the door was some good banter.

That Plasticque is hot hot hot, damn will showering heroines never be sexy? Glad we're seeing how far her "addiction" is taking her.

[Northern Chill]

Thanks everyone for your feedback....as was surmised, the "awakening" scene was indeed inspired by the pulp novels and movies of the era. As to whether JW/GG are back or not, that will be clarified in the coming chapters...if you read carefully...

Hope you enjoy what is to come...!

[Sumatra]

Was hoping for more resolution. Only fault, otherwise tops the last by far.

The sex, fucking hot, that foursome at the start was to die for. Sold me on the bimbo aspect of Justina for sure. A shit ton of content in this one.

New characters, Maelynn Yang, hot undercover corporate spy? Hell yes. A police chief who cares about the heroes? Works.

When Justice Woman broke through Justina, awesome. I thought she would be a doll in this one for sure. Her finding Gallant Girl like that was hot, definitely.

No way did they escape in one piece like that, they're definitely sleepers now, Plastique might have to beat them down.

On her, her milk addiction I didn't think too much of, now I like it, she's so powerful in public, tand aken down behind the scenes so perfectly.

That last page with Dylan is awesome too. Whole issue.

-Sumatra

[tomcat]

Hey Sumatra, don't hurry with resolution, yet. What about the third part next month? >.<
Other than that, I agree. Uzobono did a great job to make Northern Chill's sexy story even hotter
I can't wait for more dolls!

[msgrey]

Yes! Number three is on my top list! Thank you Northernchill for this superissue!!

first I would like to say how much I love you the world you have made in this, dolls maids those police! all are sexy, this issue was very detailed:

first the cover, is this Gallant Girl? Why is "Justina" looking at her like that? very deceptive.

Page 1. the start, Dylan Monroe is gloating in classic villain form.

Page 2. a new doll, she is hot, a geisha perhaps?

Page 3-8. The orgy, this is a tremndous way to start milking dolls and Justice Woman on the Dylans cock. when the master must go away she is so needy of him.

Page 9. a sign of his plans....

Page 10-11. the police? in Karo City? there is actual law here? is good to see Plastique in action she will never give up!

Page 12-13. a new side of Dylan, but his plans is foiled by Ms. Yang, and sector 23? is this important? her predecessor must have been dolled yes? possibly for not agreeing with her boss

Page 14. oh the hero, reduced to this yet she still recognizes in her mind her friend.

Page 15. how many maids does Dylan have?! this is a amazing house!

Page 16. Justice Woman comes back mental combat with Justina? this was a big point for myself, seeing her conflict is very nice.

Page 17. Even drones notice, she is in danger now but Justina will be beaten!

Page 18-19. Free!

Page 20. my Plastique! very cool effects, as we read in Uzobonos biograhy she uses "bubble" fields to lift her prey the Invisible Woman of fantastic 4 of Karo.

Page 21-22. A sad moment. they only want to help, this city is too bleak for them i think.

Page 23. Justice Woman, what do you see?!

Page 24. so Dylan dolls maids who do not clean, a true control villain what he cannot control he erases! and are all his maids so sexy?

Page 25. Gallant Girl! but why is she there?

Page 26. Why wont she speak? is this a mannequin? a statue? she was a doll only earlier? what happen?

page 27-30. 284, this is mark 1-2? Also with Gina doll find our heroine, but she is too strong for this, she is Justice she outsmarts simple dolls easy. the sex in the pages is top notch.

Page 31. a devious look. I am a fan of superheroines now making theyre own plots.

Page 32-33. But no! she is stopped? some fighting, who wins? no. Justice woman cannot be stopped by mere dolls.

Page 34-35. i cannot speak for these pages, they are very confusing is this the real ones? copies? are they controled? erased? very well done however. it is good to see them escaped.

Page 36. i like this dialogue, no matter what heroes are always detectives they must ever get to the truth!

Page 37-38. Plastique happy! its all i wanted she looks so good!

Page 39. at her home. and Anna doll from Silent Auction is here as her servant now?' though she does not treat her as object it seems, a warm greeting tells such.

Page 40. hothothot plastique!

Page 41. we see her addicted to milk more, poor Plastique but this does not seem to affect her outside so is ok. what is her % of conversion to doll? 2% now, 4%?

Page 42. Dylan. masterminding something, he sees Justice and Gallant are back but he doesn not worry? he has done something, I fear what.

was a tremenduos comic, I cannot say it enough, I only want number three NOW!!!