League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

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League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

Postby Akonkid » August 4th, 2010, 7:07 pm

Hey everyone! With my Duality Dame story wrapped up (for now), it's time to move on to greener pastures.

And those pastures star.... Gorilla Gal?! Yeah, you read that right. The League's simian superhero is getting her own book, and it's going to be wild! And she's pulling in some familiar faces along for the ride!

Be sure to check out some pin-ups of the powerhouse primate here: http://www.mccomix.com/gallery2/main.php?g2_itemId=921&g2_page=2

And you can glimpse the cover for the upcoming story here: http://www.mccomix.com/gallery2/main.php?g2_itemId=10671

Let me know what you all think before the big day! I want to get some discussions in here! Excited? Horrified? Eager to see Ms. Universe and Madame Machine return? Have no clue who any of them are? Confused about the new blond in the corner? Doesn't matter; this is the thread for all things "Monkey Business", so enjoy the pics and upcoming comic and share your thoughts here!
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Re: League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

Postby begbie_rentonspud » August 4th, 2010, 7:12 pm

Heh... I was right about Gorilla Gal... Who knew? I can't wait. :D

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Re: League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

Postby Northern Chill » August 4th, 2010, 7:22 pm

Very cool idea to see this array of characters though it means questions have to be asked.

- Is this a new Ms. Universe or is the previous appearance non canon?

- Madame Machine....she was turned into a drone a ways back as was DD and KK. Does it get explained how this got undone or maybe mentioned?

This looks like a fun story arc...looking forward to it....:D
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Re: League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

Postby Akonkid » August 4th, 2010, 8:24 pm

Northern Chill wrote:Very cool idea to see this array of characters though it means questions have to be asked.

- Is this a new Ms. Universe or is the previous appearance non canon?

- Madame Machine....she was turned into a drone a ways back as was DD and KK. Does it get explained how this got undone or maybe mentioned?

This looks like a fun story arc...looking forward to it....:D


The previous appearance was very much canon. The last time we saw Ms. Universe, she was some robot frankenstein creation for an evil, demented villain alongside her partner Cosmo Girl.... so is this the same one? Wait and see.

It's been almost 20 years since Madame Machine, DD, KK, and Golden Girl were turned into drones. I have plans to explain how they wound up normal again, but don't expect the answers right away. Fully expect it to be brought up and addressed though.
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Re: League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

Postby Tecknophyle » August 6th, 2010, 7:44 pm

I hate to be pedant...well, no I don't actually...but, umm...gorillas don't have tails. None of the Hominoidea (chimps, gorillas, humans, orangutans, gibbons) do.

Monkey Maiden, Langur Lass, Baboon Babe, Ms Macaque...good, tail okay. Gorilla Gal, not so much.
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Re: League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

Postby Northern Chill » August 6th, 2010, 7:55 pm

Tecknophyle wrote:I hate to be pedant...well, no I don't actually...but, umm...gorillas don't have tails. None of the Hominoidea (chimps, gorillas, humans, orangutans, gibbons) do.

Monkey Maiden, Langur Lass, Baboon Babe, Ms Macaque...good, tail okay. Gorilla Gal, not so much.


Well, according to GG's origin, she gained her apppearance from an area where a type of gorillas existed that were far smarter than the typical gorilla species. Perhaps higher intelligence for this type of gorilla species came at the price of a vestigial tail....:)
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Re: League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

Postby dumbtime » August 6th, 2010, 8:32 pm

Tecknophyle wrote:I hate to be pedant...well, no I don't actually...but, umm...gorillas don't have tails. None of the Hominoidea (chimps, gorillas, humans, orangutans, gibbons) do.

Monkey Maiden, Langur Lass, Baboon Babe, Ms Macaque...good, tail okay. Gorilla Gal, not so much.


Well, the Gorilla in Liberty Grove apparently does. She exceeds the defined bounds of the natural world and entered a new one, The one called creative imagination. (And yes, i'm being sarcastic to be funny and still make a point, not create a debate.)
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Re: League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

Postby Doctor Robo » August 6th, 2010, 9:12 pm

Tecknophyle wrote:I hate to be pedant...well, no I don't actually...but, umm...gorillas don't have tails. None of the Hominoidea (chimps, gorillas, humans, orangutans, gibbons) do.

Monkey Maiden, Langur Lass, Baboon Babe, Ms Macaque...good, tail okay. Gorilla Gal, not so much.


So you're willing to allow that a woman can have hybrid human/simian DNA, but not that she can have a tail? :P
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Re: League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

Postby mctek » August 6th, 2010, 9:42 pm

let's not forget the hybrid cat woman...

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Re: League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

Postby Akonkid » August 6th, 2010, 10:20 pm

Lol. Gorillas most certainly don't have tails.... and yet Gorilla Gal's got one hanging right between her firm and supple butt cheeks. How could this be?

Don't worry, all will be revealed in due time, though it's not exactly some grand revelation.... but it was deliberate.

Then again, I originally WAS going to make her "Baboon Babe" and she'd have a nice and shiny red ass. Alas, that was tossed aside due to villains not knowing if she'd been spanked recently or not.
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Re: League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

Postby Akonkid » August 17th, 2010, 6:46 pm

Hey avid readers, I'm back with a brand new comic with a brand new story for you all to enjoy!

An old enemy of Liberty Grove is back on the streets, enslaving helpless women and carrying out a fiendish plot of unspeakable evil that could destroy the entire city and tear the League of Liberty apart! And the only one that can stop her is.... Gorilla Gal?! Yes, the simian superhero of primate powers takes her first big-footed steps forward towards testing her own against the likes of Madame Machine! But before she does, she has an even more horrifying ordeal to endure... a date with Captain Love!

Find all the locomotion here: http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2/main.php?g2_itemId=13628

Enjoy the comic everyone, and thanks for supporting MCComix!
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Re: League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

Postby Tecknophyle » August 17th, 2010, 7:18 pm

Dialogue: very good. Love the continuity porn in the background with the extra characters. Humour very good. Gratuitous shots at Republicans, even better.

It's also nice to see the improvement in render quality over the years.
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Re: League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

Postby 20eyes » August 18th, 2010, 2:24 pm

I'll ask that party specific politics be kept out of what was otherwise a good intro chapter. Dogging politics in general, acceptable. Dogging only one party...very alienating for those who feel the same about the opposite party.
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Re: League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

Postby the_collector » August 18th, 2010, 4:29 pm

Y'know what I love about your stories, Akon? The sense of humour. The dialogue between Captain Love and GG was pretty inspired. I think that the good Captain is fast becoming one of my favourite characters.

Also loved seeing Byron and Lola enjoying an intimate dinner together. A very nice touch! I'm already looking forward to the next chapters.

Keep up the great work!

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p.s. 20eyes: A throwaway comment by a fictional villain doesn't really constitute "dogging" in my book. Perhaps if all of Akonkid's work was an anti-Republican screed masquerading as a piece of mind control titillation, then yes, you could say he was guilty of partisanship. As it is, it's just a joke! Lighten up! Besides, I'm pretty sure Akonkid's saving all the controversy up for when Jesus and Mohammed make a cameo appearance in Chapter 4.
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Re: League of Liberty - "Monkey Business"

Postby Akonkid » August 18th, 2010, 4:41 pm

20eyes wrote:I'll ask that party specific politics be kept out of what was otherwise a good intro chapter. Dogging politics in general, acceptable. Dogging only one party...very alienating for those who feel the same about the opposite party.


My apologies if the political jab offends anyone... since that actually was a jab at MYSELF. :P My girlfriend and I are of opposing political factions, so we bicker and banter at times about it, and that was a line she used at me once. So... I put a little of "her" into the story.
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