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Flawed Actions

Postby Northern Chill » February 8th, 2013, 7:06 pm

Hello everybody...today, the opening chapter of Flawed Actions debuts here in the member's section at MCComix.

Eri Watanabe is a typical young woman..cute, ambitious, looking for friends...oh, and starting a career of fighting crime as the electrically powered Eotla! Does Eri have the right stuff when it comes to facing down criminals in the steet...and what mysterious force may be the deciding factor in such a path. Read the exciting beginnings in Chapter #1 of Flawed Actions!!

Members can find this update in the member's section at http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2 ... emId=67742

Big kudos to MadCurse for the great looking art in this update...MadCurse is one of the great talents of Poser and it's a privilege to workin with him in this collab.

Enjoy the update...feedback welcome as always!!

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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Hector2 » February 8th, 2013, 7:34 pm

Dear Northern Chill and Madcurse:

Congratulations for another great story! I will read it and left a review later, but I am so anxious to welcome Madcurse to MC Comix!

He is one of my favorite artists! I love his work! Please tell him that I am very happy to see he is working with you!

Congratulations to both of you, but I cannot stop thinking that the real winner here is me, and all the readers ;)
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby mitru » February 9th, 2013, 1:07 am

A great Premiere!

I ever have been fanboy of Madcurse, when I began to "play" with Poser, I was a simple Hipcomix subcriber and he was one of my favorite artists and he still is.

I admit that it's the first of your comic series I read, Northern Chill, but I like your storytelling style too.
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Mr. Cryptic » February 11th, 2013, 9:56 am

The woman in this comic, especially Eotla, are very nice looking!
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Northern Chill » February 14th, 2013, 11:48 am

Thanks everybody...MadCurse does great work and I know he'll be a big hit here at the site.

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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Hector2 » February 16th, 2013, 1:01 am

Dear Northern Chill and Madcurse:

Flawed Actions is a great work: following the adventures of a novice heroine, we found two thugs that believe that stealing is more worthy doing it with style, a intrepid reporter, two robotic drones and one diabolical mastermind whose face we could not see.

I love a story that presents various characters without feeling confusing, and this is one of them: The conflicts are presented very straightforward, and I believe they will be interesting stories in this universe.

I loved the story, but loved even more the art, I always had been Madcurse’s fan, and I am happy to see another of his comics.

Great work! I am anxious to see next issue!
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby madcurse » February 16th, 2013, 7:59 pm

Hello Guys..
Thank you !! Everybody for the kind words :oops: . I'm glad that all of you enjoy the story so far. :D
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Northern Chill » March 4th, 2013, 3:30 pm

Just to let everybody know...MadCurse had a r/l emergency this weekend and it pushes the next chapter for Flawed from March 5 to the 8th. Sorry about the delay folks but I hope it doesn't affect the members enjoyment of the update.

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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Northern Chill » March 8th, 2013, 12:38 pm

Hello everybody...today, part 2 of Flawed Actions debuts in the member's section at MCComix.

Lana has been captured by shapely captors and has been sprinted away to the secret base of a mysterious villain known as the Dominator. What fate awaits her as technology is used by her host to further his twisted goals? Find out in part 2 of this story.

Members can find this update at http://www.mccomix.com/members/gallery2 ... emId=69855

Big kudos to MadCurse for a superlative job on the art for this update..truly, one of the finest Poser artists in this niche I have had the pleasure of working with.

Enjoy...feedback welcome as always!

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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby obviousagent » March 8th, 2013, 1:06 pm

Well this is shaping up to be an awesome series, can't wait for part three to get here.
Really well done.
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Northern Chill » March 8th, 2013, 5:54 pm

Thanks, obviousagent...glad you've enjoyed what you read so far. The next chapters will hopefully be just as entertaining.

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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Hector2 » March 12th, 2013, 11:40 pm

Hi there Guys!

Now, Flawed Actions # 2 is a bit confusing: Who is the dominator, and who was Tina? Is she one of the consortbots?

One thing I will never do as a villain is to change the appeareance of the heroines I capture to exactly the same, like the consorbots seems to be... I mean, I want diversity, but I think that if you're into robot women, this is a good way to begin...

I will wait for the next issue anxiously
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Northern Chill » March 14th, 2013, 11:07 am

Hi Hector,

The Dominator is the evil cyborg type who controls the Consort Bots that maintain his base...among other things. As for his references, those are references to his time before his current state....which might explored as the arc proceeds. Suffice to say, the Dominator has plans befitting his nature.

Glad you've enjoyed the story so far...a bit slow so far in plot advancement but with new characters/setting, it takes time to build in profiles and such. Lots of enjoyable action to come, for sure.

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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby xarielx » March 30th, 2013, 11:10 am

Very interesting plot Northern! I second Hector2 questions, and I think my own can be answered as the comic progresses, nevertheless, this reader is quite enjoying the buildup.
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Re: Flawed Actions

Postby Northern Chill » March 31st, 2013, 9:32 am

xarielx wrote:Very interesting plot Northern! I second Hector2 questions, and I think my own can be answered as the comic progresses, nevertheless, this reader is quite enjoying the buildup.


Thanks Xarielx...it's a slow building story as we intro the players and fill in the setting of a new universe but I think you'll like what is to come..:)

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