Hector2 wrote:Hi MCtek!
About Issue 6:
First of all, I tought Prisma was captured the last issue, but checking issue 5, I see that was not the case.
There is a lot, really a lot, to discuss here: The crossover with Metrobay, the visit to the clinic of “Rick” and “Max”, two of the slimiest villains in Metrobay (Max, how I hate his guts) and the first sign of a superheroine who could save the others… just because she is the naïve newcomer.
And what on earth were they thinking letting a brainwashed norse goddess as the recepcionist?
But that’s not the best part, the best part, definitely, is the character design of Toxaris, Redback, Bombshell, Mystic Onix an Lexa. They were so cool, so beautiful in their heroines outfits, it’s a shame we won’t see them in those anymore, because they will be wearing a nurse uniform.
In the last issues, I tought the pacing was a little slow, because it was just:
1. Meet the heroine(s) of the issue.
2. She / They are preoccupied with the sudden disappearance of others heroines.
3. Suddenly, they are attacked by one or various of those very heroines they were thinking about.
4. Mind Changer presents himself and takes over with a suave charm.
5. Heroine(s) in hospital working as nurses.
And so, I wanted you to capture all and see what happens next.
But here I realize that his mere character design is interesting. I want to know more about them and their personalities. Is Toxaris like a female Green Arrow, or Lexa a female Captain America? And Bombshell! Could we see a flashback of them in action?
Well, I know your work is already written and draw, but it’s just a suggestion.
The bottom line: I really loved this issue and those heroines are cool.
Keep up the good job
Hector.
steverogers5 wrote:Loved this chapter. Especially since I'm a big fan of super-heroines being betrayed by their mind controlled former friends and allies. That's always hot to read!
And I also loved seeing them helplessly strapped into mind control chairs, as that's one of my favourite types of mind control. So top marks from me for this chapter! Keep up the great work!
Quite. It's not just seeing them in action, either. I also quite enjoy the contrast between past and present. Such as Contact and Silver Swallow--from loving couple to coworkers in passing, dedicated to pleasing others. Or Battlemaiden's shift to from warrior goddess to wanton pacifist. Even poor TB-01's transformation to inanimate trophy. We get some idea of who these heroines were, as heroines and people.nitpicker wrote:I felt the last story rushed things a bit. After the first few issues had a slow build up with elaborate means to capture a few of the heroines, this last issue had no less than 5 heroines fall into the clutches of Mindchanger. Probably in the minority here but the anticipation and build up are as interesting to me as the capture. I assume the storyline needed to be accelerated a bit but it would have been nice to see some of the New Guard use their powers.
Suggestion: Seconded!Hector2 wrote:I humbly suggest this: tell your tale as you already conceived it with MCtek, but you can begin a pool about what characters the readers want to see again (my votes are for Toxaris, Bombshell, Lexa and Battle Maiden). Or better yet, you could make a “Roxio City Enciclopaedia”.
kakyo001 wrote:the progress of the story is quite nice, but I'm not a big fan of permanent mind control... a permanent enslaved heroine can't be put under mind control again
with that said, I hope they will get freed somehow at the end of the story (or in a sequel )
Hector2 wrote:Dear MCtek:
The cover of Issue # 7 is great!
Is that nurse lexa figthing Bombshell? I cannot say for sure. However, this is a break from the narrative of the last issues!
I can guess there will be an exciting tale in the next issue and I can't wait to see it!
Hector 2
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