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Re: Island of Zombot

Postby mctek » August 2nd, 2012, 9:02 pm

Hey gang!

Sorry for the extreme delay, birthday's tend to do that to you, in my case it got extended to today, ^_^; got hijacked....The cake was nice. In anycase, today's update is also brought to you by Uzobono and Northern Chill with there awesome help with dialogue. Uzo hit the nail on the head with my version of zombot logic ^_^ North did a awesome job with the mannequin and kicking my ass with typo corrections. Also, i got annoyed with Peregrine/Agent Bird's skin texture and changed it up, I'll toss up some test renders here in a few, let me know what you guys think yay or nay!

Tek~

Island of Zombot #7

It appears that Baron Feelix Von Ick has thought of everything and has seemingly defeated all of his future worries and then some. As the day moves on, Kitten finds out just how loyal her mentor, The Pink Pussycat, truly is to Von Ick. Meanwhile the zombots take to the showers for some dirty and wet fun....A few levels elsewhere, the clone now known as 42 has thoughts on her mind, as well as her mistress the Black Pussycat aka Miranda Von Ick....

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Re: Island of Zombot

Postby Ghosthand » August 2nd, 2012, 10:08 pm

I loved this issue! Especially Omega Woman's transformation into a mannequin!!! I wonder if the formula in reversable, or if she is trapped for 'several years' as Von Ick put it? And just how long is several years to him?

I'm sure many of us realize that Miranda, Kitten, and Dawn are going to be Von Ick's downfall, but it will be interesting to see how it all comes about. Can't wait for the next issue! Seriously, I can't wait... post it now! :)
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Re: Island of Zombot

Postby leto17 » August 3rd, 2012, 8:01 am

I've really, really enjoyed this series. The conversion scenes are very well done. I'm very pleased to see the new zombots together and I enjoy the "upgrades" to their uniforms very much-ver flattering, and I love what's happened to Omega Woman. Miranda's so sexy, her relationship with Clone 42 is a great idea, Rebel's cute, and the Metrobay clones were an excellent idea. Please keep it up!
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Re: Island of Zombot

Postby sohta123 » August 3rd, 2012, 9:23 pm

Great issue Tek!
Loved Rebel Phase's conversion scene. Also Omega Woman as a mannequin is awesome. Hope she has some features like we saw when others were transformed (like the built-in radio) - maybe something more along the lines of war.
Still wondering about Kitten - she's not been converted yet and I'm wondering why Ick hasn't done that.
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Re: Island of Zombot

Postby Hector2 » August 4th, 2012, 10:30 pm

Dear Mctek:

Island of Zombots # 7, being my favorite comic due to your great storytelling skills and sexy situations, deserves a greatly detailed review:

Page 1: The classic conflict of a clone with existentialism.

Page 2: I think I’ve never commented this, but why Kitten is always kneelind inside her cell? I ask this because I think she could rise (her cell seems big enough for her to stand erect) but I always see her sit or in her knees. Not that I am complaining, she seems more vulnerable that way ;)

Page 4, 5 and 7: It’s truly sad to see Tabitha trying to reach her mentor only to be denied by a brainwashed agent. You managed to make her face really sad.

Page 6: Of all the possible victims of the orgasm ray, you chose my favorite: Rebel Phase needed a change of attitude and she get exactly that! And boy, his face was so beautiful! Just one thing: I know that Von Ick is prideful and everything but, assigning someone the codename “Agent Rebel” is not like, asking for trouble?

Page 8 to 12: Well, this part explains itself! Great work, but the really outstanding part is:

Page 13 to 17: I must agree with GostHand, this was the best part! Von Ick and Violet “confrontation” has all my dreams of ASFR come true. Really, the only thing I have missed with Kitten’s plight is that Von Ick isn’t gloating evilly against her. He really seems to been busy, but with Violet, he really plays this particular fantasy perfectly well.

The part I like it’s that she is… groping herself, and with a “base” that obviously is a dildo… she needs to be distracted… because she is capable to fight the fantasies of being a mannequin… is it due to Violet being the perfect woman, so the formula did not work immediately on her?

Asking her
“Don’t you agree, my dear?”
it’s cliché, but I love it! Also, the mayor mystery of the week! What is Von Ick trying to say when he claims
“Until I can rid you of that last little defect, you are not as perfect as I had planned”
. Could this mean that Von Ick also created Violet? And that Violet also knows that, so she is more interested in Von Ick’s mention of a daughter?

And the mention of the formula working on years sounds so ominous… and letting her prey of another fantasy! It was great!

Professor Micah, discoverer of the Mannequin formula, a little stiffened at the moment? Why! Who could have guessed Von Ick was a comedy genius?

Page 17 to 20: So, at last they are gonna talk. Well, I hope they can work out that!

Now about the plot: Von Ick had not had Kitten converted into an Agent because her destiny, however, he managed to convert a goddess… what reason did he had to not convert Violet? When is he going to develop his master plan about Kitten?

Well, this is another great issue of Chain reaction. I love this tale!

By the way, what about the kanji (is called like that) Von Ick had at his gun at page 16?
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Re: Island of Zombot

Postby Tecknophyle » August 5th, 2012, 1:27 am

Hector2 wrote:Dear Mctek:
Also, the mayor mystery of the week! What is Von Ick trying to say when he claims
“Until I can rid you of that last little defect, you are not as perfect as I had planned”
. Could this mean that Von Ick also created Violet? And that Violet also knows that, so she is more interested in Von Ick’s mention of a daughter?


That isn't actually a mystery. Von Ick was responsible for her powers in an attempt to make a perfect woman (at least as he defines it), as seen in Original Sin.

As for Violet wondering about the daughter, she thought he was killed in 1946, and as far as she knew had no family, so where did a daughter come from?
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Re: Island of Zombot

Postby Hector2 » August 5th, 2012, 9:13 am

Hi Technophile!

Thanks for your answer! I didn't remembered that part! I will read it later !
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Re: Island of Zombot

Postby Northern Chill » August 5th, 2012, 9:51 am

Tecknophyle wrote:
Hector2 wrote:Dear Mctek:
Also, the mayor mystery of the week! What is Von Ick trying to say when he claims
“Until I can rid you of that last little defect, you are not as perfect as I had planned”
. Could this mean that Von Ick also created Violet? And that Violet also knows that, so she is more interested in Von Ick’s mention of a daughter?


That isn't actually a mystery. Von Ick was responsible for her powers in an attempt to make a perfect woman (at least as he defines it), as seen in Original Sin.

As for Violet wondering about the daughter, she thought he was killed in 1946, and as far as she knew had no family, so where did a daughter come from?


If you read Original Sin, Ick's fate, as well as Kikka, is left uncertain to OW (she refers that neither was seen again in the narrative) though the latter is assumed to be dire. Ick does appear in the Island Of Ick arc after that but what he's been up to and where has been murky till now...
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Re: Island of Zombot

Postby Tecknophyle » August 5th, 2012, 10:39 am

Northern Chill wrote:
Tecknophyle wrote:
Hector2 wrote:If you read Original Sin, Ick's fate, as well as Kikka, is left uncertain to OW (she refers that neither was seen again in the narrative) though the latter is assumed to be dire. Ick does appear in the Island Of Ick arc after that but what he's been up to and where has been murky till now...


Yes, but if one looks at the rough timeline, Violet went into stasis years prior to Von Ick's known reappearance (in Isle). The mess left at the end of that story made it quite possible that no one (outside Draven and von Ick himself) had any clear idea of what had happened or who had been involved, so it's entirely possible she never knew that he was still around.
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Re: Island of Zombot

Postby Ghosthand » August 5th, 2012, 1:14 pm

I think the more important question here is where can I find the stories Original Sin and Island of Ick???
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Re: Island of Zombot

Postby kakyo001 » August 5th, 2012, 2:23 pm

Ghosthand wrote:I think the more important question here is where can I find the stories Original Sin and Island of Ick???

"Original Sin" was on HipComix... don't know if it's still there...
but no clue about "Island of Ick"...
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Re: Island of Zombot

Postby Tony » August 5th, 2012, 4:15 pm

Finster posted "Island of Ick" on metrobay.eroticillusions.com. The only issue is that that site is currently not taking new members due to payment processing issues. I picked up "original sin" directly from Dr. Robo along with some other older issues that had been removed from HIP.
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Re: Island of Zombot

Postby Ghosthand » August 5th, 2012, 6:22 pm

Tony wrote:Finster posted "Island of Ick" on metrobay.eroticillusions.com. The only issue is that that site is currently not taking new members due to payment processing issues. I picked up "original sin" directly from Dr. Robo along with some other older issues that had been removed from HIP.


Any chance that they might get posted here some day?
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Re: Island of Zombot

Postby msgrey » August 7th, 2012, 1:58 am

Hello McTek! I have some comments and questions about "The Island of Zombots #7":

the realizing of Clone 42 to Dawn is lovely! She seem to love Miranda more than her creator Von Ick, a true shift from the many clones we have seen! will this lead to a schism between Von ick and Miranda? has Von Ick until now not interacted with 42 does he not suspect something?

it is also very unsettling to Kitten what her mentor the Pink Pussycat has become, a soulless minion of Ick! how rebelphase is changed is the final underscore of his control, there is NO return for these heroines.

a line "Doubt, Fear, Uncertainty is shed. Accepting perfection comes with difficulty." is very cold but meaningful, we no longer have Rebelphase the foul mouth heroine but a loyal ruthless agent!

and when Agent Pussycat walks away the foreshadowing that this is Kittens future. its a bleak moment for heroines where old friends now recognize only their master Von Ick.

the orgy is very well done. Ruthless agents roboticaly serving Von Ick even in the shower! its what makes this series the best! Von Ick does not require mindless sex pets, he requires loyal agents, extensins of his will.

Omega woman as a mannqeuin? why did Von Ick not zombot the poor woman?! this fate seems far too cruel.. :( but she seems to enjoy the fantasys ;)

and the ending...what to talk about? they are both in love? will Von Ick find out? who is Miranda more loyal to? I cannot wait until 8!
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Re: Island of Zombot

Postby Doctor Robo » August 7th, 2012, 4:02 am

Ghosthand wrote:
Tony wrote:Finster posted "Island of Ick" on metrobay.eroticillusions.com. The only issue is that that site is currently not taking new members due to payment processing issues. I picked up "original sin" directly from Dr. Robo along with some other older issues that had been removed from HIP.


Any chance that they might get posted here some day?

Unfortunately, no. Older Metrobay Comix stories will not be posted here at MCcomix.com. If you're interested in obtaining a copy, feel free to message me directly. Thanks.

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