Hector2 wrote:Congratulations Trish, this was a wild ride!
I thought that part 13 was the finale, but I think you wrapped the things very well in this part.
The pages I loved were 216, when we see how Hypnotica’s heart is broken, followed by two awesome pages with all the Grrl Power squad. I think you played very well how confused Hypnotica must feel: the best and worst day of her life.
Also, I love to see her as an antiheroine, definitely what she did to Kristen was bad, and the fact that she referred to her as a prize is scaring enough: Now she has a frienemy in her own house.
I loved the part of the Unionized Robot (how can we blame them? Theyre working for Max!). Also, I have thought that Troublina is a spoiled little woman, but her letter to Max has redeemed her in my eyes.
However, I’m intrigued by the last page. Could you elaborate a little more why the clones are seeming like a menace in the Metrobay Universe? (also, this reminded me of a movie where people were frozen and awaken but without a soul, have you ever saw it?
Thanks for everything, your tale rocked!
Hector2
Glad you enjoyed it!
Yeah, Hypnotica may be a "hero", but she's a conflicted one, and one with a very dangerous power and very little experience or self-control. That's going to be with her for quite some time and affect a lot of people.
Don't take the last page lightly. In fact, keen readers might recognize the woman in the last page from another story I did (Body Image), which takes place after Hypnotica... expect there to be MAJOR repercussions and for this mystery woman to be involved in future events.... stay tuned!