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A couple of our artists (who shall presently remain nameless) have expressed an interest in restarting the members' requests that we used to do on HIPcomix a couple of years ago. So, we would like to issue an open call for request ideas which can be turned into comics here at MCcomix.com.

Now, before everyone starts going crazy with ideas, here are a few ground rules:

1) Ideas must be for SHORT comic series, ideally 1-2 issues of 10-12 pages per issue, plus covers. We are not looking for epics here.

2) Ideas must involve erotic mind control as the primary theme. You can mix in other fetish genres as well, but EMC must be the most important part of the story.

3) Any ideas for plot, characters, or locations that are actually used in a comic become the property of the artist/author who produces them. That's part of the deal, and is non-negotiable. If you want us to create a comic starring "Super-Mega-Turbo-Ultra Babe", then understand that the rights to her usage become property of the artist.

4) Copyrighted characters, mainstream or otherwise, will not be used without expressed permission from all parties involved. It's likely you won't see Dr. Twisted enslaving Wonder Woman or anything like that.

5) These comics, if produced, will appear in the members area of MCcomix.com. That means that while you don't have to be a member of MCcomix to make a request, you'll have to be a member to see the finished product.

6) The artists, authors, and management of MCcomix.com reserve the right to reject or alter story ideas for any reason. Futhermore, we make no guarantees that a requested story will be produced.

7) Those who make the request are entitled to public credit for the story idea, if desired. As stated in #2, the actual characters and comics become property of the producing artist.

Now that we have that unfortunately necessary legal junk out of the way, please feel free to leave your story ideas in this forum. Our staff will look them over and choose which stories, if any, they wish to work on. Thanks in advance for your participation!

- Doc

Breaking entering for revenge.

A villainess put behind bars after escaping prison goes after the cop that put her behind bars.
But before she nabs she has her fun with her lesbian lover by hypnotizing her with eyes and orders
to kidnap women without her knowing or remembering it after a series of chloroform fights. The main cop
investigates the disappearance of the victims and comes out empty by finding clues (chloroform cloths, injection needles)

Her partner is targeted next when the main cop is ambushed at night and struggles to avoid getting drugged and
is almost successful but the villainess appears out of nowhere. SHe demands she loses or the villainess will press
a button that will gas a sorority dorm and the girls will sleep the big sleep and be shipped to slavers under mind control.

A man gets assigned to an Amazonian ship as a test to see if human men can live with big, busty gorgeous Amazons. He is smaller than average and considered completely not threatening by the females. But once in, an alien intelligence reveals itself to him. It needs the sexual energy a male generates to live. He has the psionic potential to bond with the intelligence. Very few men have this potential. While the Amazon women sleep, he is able to take control of their bodies and have sex with them. As time goes on, the Amazons unconciously change their uniforms from very military to very skimpy (showing lots of cleavage, lots of leg and barefoot). He can now shower and bunk with them, and no one thinks anything of it. Finally, their minds are altered enough where he no longer needs to control them, having sex with him becomes a rotating responsilbility, though all the women think of it as boring maintenance work. They treat him no longer as a wimpy man, but as a platonic friend.

@AshleyChloroformed - sounds good. We could use Daisy for this - heh. Maybe we could make it about some villainess ( you choose ) and have 2 x 10 page issues exploring how the villainess MC's Daisy into being her slave? Maybe the villainess MC's Daisy and then makes her commit a crime which gets daisy put in jail?

@lordsomno - sounds good. By Amazon ship do you mean like old days of warrior princess Xena or a sci-fi pirate spaceship type thing?

Thank you both for your request!

Once again, I'm forming the idea for a 12-24 panel story involving Gothikka and Noctrissa. I love the stories on the new site, but I miss them. I hope they get soem air time soon:).

I feel bad I missed Halloween, so I will try to create a new one. Hopefully it will work out.

The 12-24 panel limit is a good idea; otherwise the story I was creating was too unmanageable.

Great work on the new series so far, btw!

Yeah Gothikka and Noctrissa are two powerful villainesses to contend with.

Along with your requests could you also specify how you like the mind control to be visualized.

Do you want blank stare eyes or glowing eyes? What color? etc

Do they stand/walk stiff?

Do they talk normal or robotic?

Thanks!!

finister wrote:@AshleyChloroformed - sounds good. We could use Daisy for this - heh. Maybe we could make it about some villainess ( you choose ) and have 2 x 10 page issues exploring how the villainess MC's Daisy into being her slave? Maybe the villainess MC's Daisy and then makes her commit a crime which gets daisy put in jail?

@lordsomno - sounds good. By Amazon ship do you mean like old days of warrior princess Xena or a sci-fi pirate spaceship type thing?

Thank you both for your request!

How about she commits kidnapping of women and sell out the addresses of top female attorneys, detectives, heroines and cops so they can be nabbed or the time of their shift so they can be ambushed. The villainess uses her partner to get to her first and is blackmailed into getting MC'd. What do u think?

Or Daisy and her partner are kidnapped from an underground wrestling league with MC'd top female fighters

Might wanna keep story ideas real simple. Maybe focus on a small concept instead of an overall big picture concept that can't really be explored in just 20 pages.

Something like: the villainess breaks out of prison and surprizes officer daisy, MC'ing her. Then the villainess makes MC'd daisy ensnare junior officer Brittany... then MC'd Daisy and Brittany are ordered to make love to each other....??

How's this:

Villain is tired of being defeated by the city's resident heroine. She's known both for fighting crime and for loving kids. So he plans to MC her to fall in love (not with him, just in case it backfires he doesn't want her to know who did this to her), get married and start a family, giving up crime fighting in the process. Of course, he has to test his MC method, and once MC'd she has to figure out the best way to attract just the right man.

finister wrote:Might wanna keep story ideas real simple. Maybe focus on a small concept instead of an overall big picture concept that can't really be explored in just 20 pages.

Something like: the villainess breaks out of prison and surprizes officer daisy, MC'ing her. Then the villainess makes MC'd daisy ensnare junior officer Brittany... then MC'd Daisy and Brittany are ordered to make love to each other....??

Sure, I like that. The villainess has fun with her, eyes white standing straight when the villainess stripsearches her n does her in bed before proceeding with her partner but acts normal in the enviroment.

What do u think

finister wrote:@AshleyChloroformed - sounds good. We could use Daisy for this - heh. Maybe we could make it about some villainess ( you choose ) and have 2 x 10 page issues exploring how the villainess MC's Daisy into being her slave? Maybe the villainess MC's Daisy and then makes her commit a crime which gets daisy put in jail?

@lordsomno - sounds good. By Amazon ship do you mean like old days of warrior princess Xena or a sci-fi pirate spaceship type thing?

Thank you both for your request!

Looking at a space ship kinda thing. Amazonians are a race stronger, larger and 'endowed' than human (guy have bigger cocks, girls have bigger tits).
Amazons always segregate their ships, if they didn't, nothing would ever get done (larger libidos too).

Amazon are generally hetero, but about 10 percent of men and women are bi. Homosexuality is rarely seen in women, and never in men.

Amazon women usually sleep in something will prevent their boobs from moving around while they sleep, generally cleavage showing nightgowns (either long or short depending in the time of year.).

While controlled at night, women would have blank expressions and eyes closed. If controlled during the day, they would have blank looks (no glowing eyes). Later in the comic, they would seem completely normal while performing things that would have been unthinkable a few weeks before.

I'd kill for a cameo MC comic starring the Pink Pussycat. lol.

How about Pink Pussycat awakens to find herself strapped to a machine (Any kind really) in a secret lair. Sees the villain/villainess by a switch who explains what he/she is going to do to her (Make her an obedient slave) and then throws the switch. Pussycat gets turned into an obedient slave (With blank eyes and talks robotic). Once unstrapped, she is ordered to stand to attention. She is then ordered to strip out of her whole costume (Including the mask, books, gloves and cat ears). The villain/villainess admires her naked body, and then commands her to masturbate on the spot. After her orgasm, she's ordered to suck/lick her master's/mistress's dick/pussy and to swallow every drop. She is then handed a box and ordered to put the clothes inside the box on. It then cuts to her wearing a very revealing super villain costume and the villain says "You are no longer the Pink Pussycat, you are now the insert Super Villain name here!", and Pussycat repeats. Then maybe it can end with Pussycat waking up and realizing it was all a dream (if you don't want it to end with her as a slave)

Yeah, not very original, but I love the Pink Pussycat. ^^;

How about a holiday themed story? Heroine(s) awake on Christmas morning and head down to the tree dressed in night time sleep wear (the skimpier, the better) to unwrap gifts. After comments about gifts and typical banter, they come across one that is from Mister Clause. The gift is opened to reveal a glowing jewel inside and within moments, the women in the room all have the blank face, controlled look.

Mister Clause enters..briefly mentions he is from the South Pole and half brother to the "goody goody guy up north" and has a sled pulled by four flying polar bears (had seven but accountants work for him in his shop advised him to cut back for cost sake). The man, explains that instead of giving, he takes from a select clientele and this year, he has chosen this location.

Clause gets the women to put on a show...posing, cuddling, lovemaking, satisfying his carnal needs, etc. He then leaves in his sled with the women waving and shouting mindlessly as he departs. Shortly thereafter, the women recover and wonder what they are doing standing around...not noticing the new decoration of a small gem on the tree....

Hi, quietly enjoying the site and thought I'd take a stab at this.

Characters

• Husband: Has to be young and handsome. Working man of some sort, blue collar. (appears briefly).
• Wife: Has to be young and hot. Housewife, in boring PJs. Not a super heroine alter-ego unless that's easier.
• Kid: Has to be school age (appears briefly).
• Visitor: Has to be some combination of old, overweight, and/or ugly. Business formal.

Setting

• Suburbia. At most, the front of a house, dining room, bedroom.

Control Style

• While blank and mindless, just fuzzy in the head. No need for any particular "programming" or visible effects. She's been conditioned.
• While (briefly) in hussy mode, as happy and passionate as a woman who just found her true love.

Plot

• Typical morning, breakfast and brief chat to establish happy, normal family scenario.
• Husband and Kid finish up and head to work and school (Husband dropping Kid off).
• Wife lines up her to-do list, goes over it while changing from PJ's to jeans and t-shirt.
• To-Do List: (random normal stuff) Groceries, Visit Mom, Get Oil Change, (then) Pinnacle.
• She gets stuck on "Pinnacle." Looks confused, stops getting dressed, and goes back to dining room.
• Just thinking "Pinnacle, pinnacle, pinnacle." Sits down, stares blankly, just the word in her head.
• Doorbell snaps her out of it. Switches to hussy mode, runs to the door.
• Visitor gets greeted like a long-lost lover. She smothers him with hugs and kisses (still semi-dressed) and "Missed you!" sorts of phrases.
• He's short on time, struggles and checks a card. Reads: "Pinnacle avocado."
• She's blank again, leads him back to the dining room.
• Services him sexually (BJ, from behind bent over table, in her bedroom, anything's fine) - all blank and mindless. Like Club Pump without the green eyes.
• When he's done, he rushes off to a waiting cab wishing he wasn't late for his flight.
• Wife picks up where she left off. First thing on her to-do list is now: shower.
• Decides to put off oil change until tomorrow, where does her time go?

Thanks for the excuse to write. It was fun to think this through regardless of whether it becomes visual or not!