by leto17 » November 8th, 2010, 3:35 pm
I actually enjoyed the story thoroughly.
I didn't mind how happy the zombabes were in being given an opportunity to gain pleasure and serve their goddess myself; I see it as a reward for Gothikka's marriage. I understand the concerns, but I sorta deal with it in the following manner: as long as the idea is that their ability to demonstrate pleasure is wholely contingent on her command alone it is kinda neat alongside their overwhelming amount of time the zombabes spend in perfect sexualized and pleasurable zombie contentment as servants and sextoys. To me, the Zombabes are sex zombies serving their goddess; showing emotion only sometimes in anticipation of satisfying their wants and desires and allowed to by their goddess Gothikka, for whom the fullfillment of sexual wants and obediance to her sexual whims and commands are her reason for being. Even then, they may often or generally perform the acts in machinelike, robotic displays of efficiency while satisfying lustfull pleasures. As long as the zombabes have essentially two modes; perfect erotic sexualized zombielike obediance and contentment with the condition in service of their goddess Gothikka, and happiness at being noticed and rewarded by their goddess and then performing their sexual duties and pleasures in an intense, machinelike manner, I'm fine with it.
The Zombabe designs were fantastic; i personally think this is Ms. Metrobay, Omega Woman, and Brown Sugar at their sexiest by far for me. I especially enjoyed the sex scene between Ms. Metrobay and Omega Woman, and it's always good to see Brown Sugar's lips and mouth in action. And the transformation sequence was great; seeing all three of them lined up on slabs and electricty coursed through their perfect forms and heaving breasts and perfect, severe, yet ultrafeminine features a la Metropolis style was great!
The zombabes are my favorite designs ever, even more than the robounits; the ponytail and slicked back hair, alabaster skin, a black goth, and the restrained yet effective dark makeup and lipstick were incredibly well-done.
Voltara is simply incredible; her design is fantastic! Her eys,faciaI features, body, and of course her breasts, were spot on. I think she makes a great Bride for Gothikka to use to satisfy her lusts. She is a fantastic design for someone like Kikka; every time they make love it must be like a vampire satisfying their lusts on an innocent bridal virgin/ultimate sex toy. You guys did an excellent job combining her "eternal purity" with pure sexpot. Again, I don't think I even have to describe the magnificence of her chest. Plus she was born a slave who essentially doesn't know anything else and has been preprogrammed that way which is kinda sexy in its own right.
I also didn't mind how it ended; it's sorta a cliffhanger, but also not. Gothikka has her Bride, and has three supersexy Gothic Zombiebabe servants wholely and solely devoted to her.which is a happy ending for evil old me:). I suspect that the idea is that this story will parallel others, is ongoing, and opens the door to future stories, ones that I hopefully will not have to wait until next Halloween!
I also like how Gothikka's objectives are not just simply power, such as conquering the world. To me, her desires and imulses are different from most villians. For most villians, the satisfaction of sexual desires is a reward for gaining power; for her, sexual satisfaction IS the basis of her power, existence, status, and position if that makes sense. Max Indexs uses his money and brains to fullfill his wants; She is sexual want and fullfills those wants by acting on it, such as in the creation of Voltara for her to love through ravishing her. She just wants pleasure, power over those who give her pleasure, a bit of revenge which she has satisfied, and rewards those whom she controls with contented eroticized and sexualized zombielike obediance and pleasure. She's actually fairly nice toward those she has enslaved and reward her with perfect, and often robotic obediance. And she does it while maintaining her intellect and cunning and magical powers and strength, making her soemone you don't want to mess with.
The only complaint is that I thought the wedding could have been more elaborate; the Zombabes as bridesmaids and Spiderretta and Noctrissa crying in joy at the wedding at the wedding.
I wonder where everybody is gonna sleep?
Thanks