"Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Sierra008 » August 24th, 2010, 10:43 am

You know I can really see Crissy not wanting to return to her own body, but what if L.I.S.A. likes Crissy's body as much as Crissy likes L.I.S.A.'s? With Crissy's blackout power, she could prevent the heroines from using their powers to return her to her robotic shell. Also one of the questions that hasn't been asked yet is what would happen if Crissy somehow triggers Milkmans programing rendering her a slave to his will? Sure L.I.S.A. could prevent it while in Crissy's body but if she sees follows what Crissy has been telling her, would she stop it from happening? Just something to think about, I hope to see Crissy completely robotizied, I think that being a willing convert could cause some interesting side effects of transformation.
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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Doctor Robo » August 29th, 2010, 8:26 pm

From the pages of MCcomix.com, Doctor Robo and Finister Foul proudly present “Forbidden Fantasy” chapter 12!

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Imagine you were just given control of an incredibly powerful body, with the strength to crush a cinder block with your bare hands and fantastic mind control powers to boot. Now imagine that this body also looks like one of the most beautiful people your city has ever known. Wouldn’t you want to take this new body out for a spin and see what it can really do? Well, so does cadet Crissy Tanner, and her first target is her boss… Police Chief Coleman!

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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Doctor Robo » September 12th, 2010, 1:36 pm

From the pages of MCcomix.com, Doctor Robo and Finister Foul proudly present “Forbidden Fantasy” chapter 13!

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Whatever happened to Crissy Tanner? When we first met the young cadet, she was the epitome of naïve innocence, a shy rookie heroine happy to just be part of the team. Ever since she was enslaved by the rogue A.I. named “Sentius”, she has had an insatiable yearning to return to a state of obedient bliss. This drive has consumed her every thought, to the point that the sweet Crissy we once knew is gone, replaced by a burning lust to live out her forbidden fantasy… no matter the consequences.

This week Crissy finds herself face to face with two of the most respected and powerful heroines in Metrobay – Valient Grrl and Alpha Woman! What happens when dark desires win out over honor and loyalty? You’ll have to read the chapter to find out!

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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Akonkid » September 12th, 2010, 3:21 pm

This is like the sexiest Jerry Springer in the making ever.

"I caught my lover having sex with a robot duplicate of my mother that had swapped bodies with another woman!"

Fantastic issue. Everyone knows I'm biased, but Valient Grrl was jaw-dropping, and it's good to see Alpha Woman in action (and then set up for what's sure to be a stand-out follow-up issue.)

Crissy's in a whole heap of trouble now. Can't wait for more.
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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Northern Chill » September 16th, 2010, 4:43 pm

Very nice chapter though pacing has slowed considerably over the last few chapters. I suspect, though, this is to allow the buildup for a truly memorable ending whenever that happens.
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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby bluemax2 » September 20th, 2010, 9:00 am

Doc and Finn:
Any news on the latest chapter?

thanks.

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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Doctor Robo » September 20th, 2010, 10:08 am

bluemax2 wrote:Doc and Finn:
Any news on the latest chapter?

thanks.

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It will be posted tonight. A communications error has led to a slight delay. My apologies for the inconvenience.

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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Doctor Robo » September 20th, 2010, 1:09 pm

From the pages of MCcomix.com, Doctor Robo and Finister Foul proudly present “Forbidden Fantasy” chapter 14!

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Crissy has discovered Lisa’s ability to control minds with her hypnotic breasts, and she absolutely LOVES it! Even though she knows it is wrong, Crissy is having too much fun toying with peoples’ minds and isn’t about to stop now. First came Chief Coleman. Then Valient Grrl fell victim to Crissy’s busty charms. Now Alpha Woman is locked in a battle to save her own mind from certain enslavement... and her lover Valient Grrl has suddenly joined the other team!

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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Akonkid » September 20th, 2010, 2:25 pm

Mind control, hot women, and some nice sex. Couldn't ask for more.

Though, I do wonder, after Valient Grrl's new "swelling", how much tighter can her uniform get? ... that is NOT a complaint. ;)

I wonder if Lisa/Crissy and Hypnotica will ever cross paths and discover whose hypno-boobs are the most potent.
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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby PsiLance » September 21st, 2010, 11:56 am

Akonkid wrote:I wonder if Lisa/Crissy and Hypnotica will ever cross paths and discover whose hypno-boobs are the most potent.


Not that I'd complain, but isn't that like 'crossing the streams'? Perhaps it has already happened and no one was capable of remembering it.
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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby dumbtime » September 22nd, 2010, 8:42 am

This has been a most outstanding series of updates with Crissy/Lisa, VG and AW. I just wished the nipple pinching would have migrated to them nursing each other's tits with their mouths. I'm talking fullblown nursing, not just licking. But, alas, beggers can't be chosers.
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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Doctor Robo » September 26th, 2010, 8:50 pm

From the pages of MCcomix.com, Doctor Robo and Finister Foul proudly present “Forbidden Fantasy” chapter 15!

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Some people get everything they want in life, and still are never happy. In the case of Crissy Tanner, this is perhaps more true than ever. Over the past few issues we have seen her cavorting around Superheroine Squad Headquarters in Lisa’s robot body, masquerading both as a living doll and as her ‘twin’, the legendary heroine Ms. Metrobay. Now Crissy has decided that the fun and games are over, and wants her old body back. She also wants something more… something only one man in all of Metrobay can give her. So exactly what is it that she wants, and who does she need to get it? Did someone call a DOCTOR…?

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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Doctor Robo » October 10th, 2010, 12:26 am

From the pages of MCcomix.com, Doctor Robo and Finister Foul proudly present “Forbidden Fantasy” chapter 16!

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One could argue successfully that Metrobay Comix would not exist without the contributions of one man. Nope, not Doctor Robo. Not Finister Foul either. So who is the most irreplaceable man in the history of Metrobay? Why Ted Twiss of course!

Crissy Tanner is used to getting what she wants. A pretty young woman with a sexy body doesn’t hear ‘no’ a lot, but Ted is a new man with a new lease on life… and he doesn’t plan on ruining that anytime soon. So when Crissy asks Ted to turn her into a ‘human robot’, the former Dr. Twisted can’t bear to deny one of the only friends he has. But will his generosity ultimately do more harm than good? Visit MCcomix.com today to find out more!

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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby madcap » October 10th, 2010, 9:33 pm

FINALLY! This is the moment I've been waiting for! I'm a bit curious as to where the story is going to go from here though. I half expected Ted Twiss to fall back into his old evil ways after enslaving Chrissy (temptation being too great and all), but it looks like that's not the direction this is going in.

Most of your epic stories in the past have involved mass enslavement of tons of characters over the course of the story, but so far this one has primarily involved Chrissy and her own personal quest to get what she wants. Can you tell us anything about the future direction of the story, or are you trying to keep things close to the vest?

In any event, I LOVED this update. Fantastic stuff. I really enjoyed the little note that she left for him, knowing that it would fall out after her enslavement. I hope that we're not done seeing Chrissy enslaved, even though Twiss seems to feel guilty over what just happened.
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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Sierra008 » October 10th, 2010, 10:31 pm

I agree with Madcap, I thought that this would drive poor old Ted over the edge and he would start converting the rest of Metro Bays finest into mindless love slaves. I would love to Chrissy's powers negate his ability to transform her back and her continued android wishes to fullfill his every demented sexual fantasy will drive him back to his old evil self. With L.I.S.A. in his control he would be near unstoppable, and with him being based right in the middle of of Metro Bay headquarters, well lets just say he wouldn't have to go very far to catch his victims. Please leave Chrissy as a Fembot, although sexy, she is kind of whinny about all of this and now that she has been transformed she needs to be left that way for a while.
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