"Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Doctor Robo » June 13th, 2010, 8:57 pm

From the pages of MCcomix.com, Doctor Robo and Finister Foul proudly present “Forbidden Fantasy” chapter 3!

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Evil. Spite. Cruelty. They all have a name – Belinda Giolla. Once the queen bitch of APEX Labs, Belinda has been reduced to a run of the mill jailbird after her failed attempt to humiliate her ex-boyfriend, Ted Twiss. Now forced to spend her days within the walls of Metrobay’s most notorious prison, Belinda has slowly begun to rebuild her reputation as one of the baddest broads – and most devious minds – in town. How? With a little help from something she calls the “Psycho-Slaver”, a machine so powerful it can melt the will of even the toughest superbabe in mere seconds.

Now Belinda has turned her attention to poor Sparrow, a young heroine caught in the wrong place at the wrong time. Sparrow’s partner Bluebird has already been brainwashed into one of Belinda’s obedient pets. Will Sparrow be next?

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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Northern Chill » June 14th, 2010, 12:06 pm

A good chapter all in all. I kinda wish Sparrow's enslavement had been dragged out a bit more (an attempted escape or something like that) but the two heroines dressed as prison guards in the end made for a very enticing image. As for the second half, wow, Mechana is quite the, ummm, forward thinking fembot. Given her personality is partly composed of Ginger's and Ginger's jealousy led her down a decidedly wrong path, here's hoping Mechana doesn't make the same decisions.

Nice to see Crissy showing up...looks like that could make for interesting talk down the line.

Looking forward to seeing where the next chapter goes....:)
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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Akonkid » June 14th, 2010, 12:13 pm

Northern Chill wrote:A good chapter all in all. I kinda wish Sparrow's enslavement had been dragged out a bit more (an attempted escape or something like that) but the two heroines dressed as prison guards in the end made for a very enticing image. As for the second half, wow, Mechana is quite the, ummm, forward thinking fembot. Given her personality is partly composed of Ginger's and Ginger's jealousy led her down a decidedly wrong path, here's hoping Mechana doesn't make the same decisions.

Nice to see Crissy showing up...looks like that could make for interesting talk down the line.

Looking forward to seeing where the next chapter goes....:)


I think Mechana's "jealousy" isn't from Ginger, but rather from Valient Grrl and Belinda, both of whom have shown they're not exactly the easiest people to get along with sometimes. Ginger's personality traits were put into MilkMaid.

But, yeah, I agree. Swallow/Sparrow is absolutely adorable, and I was rather entertained at how she spent all that time bottomless, only to wind up like her partner. It's a shame she wasn't "tested" like Bluebird and Erica were, though. I enjoyed her cameo in Finister's Guardian Gals series; it's great to have a reporter in a city like Metrobay. She's exceptionally cute and I hope she's put to very good use in the future.

And poor Ted. The guy is trying so very hard to BREAK his "robo" fetish, only for MilkMaid, Mechana, and Crissy to constantly remind him of how easiest it would be. That man has far more willpower than I've got. On the other hand, I really enjoy how chummy he is with Silver Satin, and Marcy's behavior certainly remains compelling food for thought.
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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Northern Chill » June 14th, 2010, 12:25 pm

Akonkid wrote:
Northern Chill wrote:A good chapter all in all. I kinda wish Sparrow's enslavement had been dragged out a bit more (an attempted escape or something like that) but the two heroines dressed as prison guards in the end made for a very enticing image. As for the second half, wow, Mechana is quite the, ummm, forward thinking fembot. Given her personality is partly composed of Ginger's and Ginger's jealousy led her down a decidedly wrong path, here's hoping Mechana doesn't make the same decisions.

Nice to see Crissy showing up...looks like that could make for interesting talk down the line.

Looking forward to seeing where the next chapter goes....:)


I think Mechana's "jealousy" isn't from Ginger, but rather from Valient Grrl and Belinda, both of whom have shown they're not exactly the easiest people to get along with sometimes. Ginger's personality traits were put into MilkMaid.

But, yeah, I agree. Swallow/Sparrow is absolutely adorable, and I was rather entertained at how she spent all that time bottomless, only to wind up like her partner. It's a shame she wasn't "tested" like Bluebird and Erica were, though. I enjoyed her cameo in Finister's Guardian Gals series; it's great to have a reporter in a city like Metrobay. She's exceptionally cute and I hope she's put to very good use in the future.

And poor Ted. The guy is trying so very hard to BREAK his "robo" fetish, only for MilkMaid, Mechana, and Crissy to constantly remind him of how easiest it would be. That man has far more willpower than I've got. On the other hand, I really enjoy how chummy he is with Silver Satin, and Marcy's behavior certainly remains compelling food for thought.


Yep, my bad...got them mixed up. Two big breasted bots obviously overloaded my mind. Hey, wouldn't it be neat if Silver Satin is starting down the road to dark times...? Just thinking....;)
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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby ach202577 » June 14th, 2010, 3:33 pm

quite simply any heroine that goes to jail is toast
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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Doctor Robo » June 20th, 2010, 10:26 am

From the pages of MCcomix.com, Doctor Robo and Finister Foul proudly present “Forbidden Fantasy” chapter 4!

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Since the events of the so-called “Night of the Drones”, young police cadet and junior superheroine Crissy Tanner just can’t shake the feeling that she might have actually ENJOYED being a ‘human robot’ under someone else’s control. She has awoken in cold sweats just dreaming about it, and like an addict fiending for that next rush she’ll do just about anything for another taste of mindless bliss. Luckily for her there is no shortage of individuals in Metrobay with the knowledge or resources to give her what she wants. So who will she turn to for help? Hmmm… is anyone thirsty?

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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby leto17 » June 24th, 2010, 5:27 pm

Now that I've got my modem fixed, let me just state that this was a Fantastic chapter! I'm glad you took things in this direction! I hope to see things get even more intense for Chrissy as she pursues her robotization fantasies!
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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Doctor Robo » June 27th, 2010, 8:35 pm

From the pages of MCcomix.com, Doctor Robo and Finister Foul proudly present “Forbidden Fantasy” chapter 5!

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Mechana, Metrobay’s first sentient female robot, used to be unique. Created as a composite of three super-sexy Metro-babes, she was programmed for two purposes: protection and pleasure. Living among a team of superpowered crimefighters leaves her a little light on the protection duties, so she has to fill that void somehow, right?

Enter L.I.S.A. Created as an android duplicate of the famous heroine Ms. Metrobay, L.I.S.A. is everything that Mechana boasts: exotic, erotic, and robotic. Perhaps even more so. Now Mechana is faced with something she has never felt before. Can a robot be jealous? Or does she see a little too much of herself in this sexy newcomer? We’ll soon find out!

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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby leto17 » June 28th, 2010, 2:12 pm

This series just keeps getting better and better! Excellent development, Supersexy bots, and great sexy scenes and dialogue.
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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby bluemax2 » July 1st, 2010, 12:25 pm

Doc and Finn:
I do hope Mehana gets mind wiped and helps our evil fembot Lisa (that is her name right?) start to take over the squad one by one. Chrissy should be the first, then Ms. Metrobay, then Marcie, etc...
Perhaps the evil fembot can entrance Ted Twiss into being her helper, since he does know all the technology and has a thing for fembots anyway.
A few ideas.
Love your work as always.

Finn:
How bout some straight images without text showing women under control "febotized"? Perhaps from the existing images or upcoming ones.

thank you both very much.

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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Doctor Robo » July 11th, 2010, 7:35 pm

From the pages of MCcomix.com, Doctor Robo and Finister Foul proudly present “Forbidden Fantasy” chapter 6!

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Mechana and L.I.S.A. come from two different worlds. One was built by Belinda as a big middle finger to her male bosses at APEX and ROPE. The other was built by a lonely old man who has a crush on the prettiest woman in town. Now that the two lusty, busty sexbots have gotten together, sparks have started to fly… literally!

Meanwhile, Cadet Crissy Tanner has struck out on her own to find someone who might help her realize her fantasy of again becoming an obedient cyborg slave. She has already been turned down by Silver Satin, but a steamy chat with lovely L.I.S.A. has renewed her hopes once more…

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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Doctor Robo » July 18th, 2010, 1:33 pm

From the pages of MCcomix.com, Doctor Robo and Finister Foul proudly present “Forbidden Fantasy” chapter 7!

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Crissy Tanner has dedicated her life to finding the person who will help her live out her “Forbidden Fantasy”. The problem is, those folks are few and far between! Luckily she has been tipped off to the existence of a man called “The Dollmaker”, who can create lifelike robotic duplicates of anyone in Metrobay. Crissy wants him to make a robot out of her, but she might not understand exactly what that entails…

Meanwhile, the Superheroine Squad is trying to track down a common hooker who just happens to be inhabiting the body of one of their own! It’s a case of mistaken identity the likes of which we’ve never seen, and Ms. Metrobay has dispatched two Gem Angels to track her down. We know one is Jade Lightning, but just who is CRYSTAL CYCLONE? Find out at MCcomix.com today!

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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Akonkid » July 18th, 2010, 10:15 pm

A new Gem Angel, eh? She's VERY busty! And I confess, I've never paid Jade Lightning's butt much attention before, but that might change. Loved her underboobs too (Enchantress would be proud).

That and Crissy is getting naughtier. The poor girl's brain is being twisted and contorted all over the place, I'll be surprised if it doesn't end up a puddle by the end. And I look forward to it.
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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby leto17 » July 19th, 2010, 8:21 am

I haven't posted much.

Part of the problem is that I am enjoying all the stories and I haven't had much time given other responsibilities.


We've had an excellent set of stories from everyone this summer. I enjoy Forbidden Fantasy for a number of reasons.

First off, the sex is great, always a must, obviously, in erotic stories. Especially Mechana and LISA-that was a great scene! The transformation scenes are also fantastic. One thing that I appreciated is how the skin tone of LISA changes with the lighting...compare pages 74 and earlier to 76 on up. She just keeps getting sexier over time. Page 42 was also tantalizing comparing LISA to a roboticized Ms. Metrobay.

The interaction between Saccharin and Chrissy is also great, and Mona looks great as usual. I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next to Chrissy. I look forward to a detailed depiction of her transformation and the creation of her sexdoll double.

Love the cop doubles that Sparrow and Bluebird have become under Erica Donovan. Those uniforms are great!

Nice to see Valor GIrl back as well, and how that story will unfold, too.
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Re: "Forbidden Fantasy" - A Grime City Story

Postby Northern Chill » July 19th, 2010, 9:47 am

An excellent chapter...interesting to see Crissy is looking to be nurtured even if she is a nympho robophile.

A new character in Crystal Cyclone with a transformation sequence that reminded me a bit of the Sailor Moon series. Also, is it just me or did her breasts get larger after she changed into her heroine duds.... :lol: ...?

Looks like lots of fun to come and can't wait to see if Crissy's doll looks like the one from her nightmare a while back.

Keep up the great work!
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